DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY

MY FIRST SURPRISE PARTY

(OUTLINE)

1 INTRODUCTION

o The beginning of the day

§ Clock

§ SMS

§ Bus

2 BODY

o Arrival to school

§ Birthday song

§ Hugs

o Birthday cake

§ Sight

§ Taste

o Presents

§ Lipstick

§ Blouse

3 CONCLUSION

ESSAY

As I slowly opened my exhausted eyes, a red light took my attention. The clock was showing an hour later than I usually get up. I tried to get up quickly but my tired body did not react even though my movements were awkward and my eyes wanted to remain closed. The idea of not attending school crossed my mind for a small time but I listen to a strange beep of my cell that was warning me that I had a new message. It was one of my dear classmates informing me that we would have a review that day. At the time of reading the message I felt under pressure, I hastily dressed myself by taking a wrinkled green shirt that was on one side of the unmade bed and took the same old blue pants that I was wearing the day before. I ran for the bus, the red and blue truck that usually passes every hour and takes me directly to school.

At university I noticed a tall boy who was descending from a grey car, he was Emmanuel a polite classmate. I decided to walk faster to catch him up and not to be the only person late. But the big surprise was when he opened the cold door of the small classroom and saw my friendly classmates with their wide opened as a sign of that awaited hug. Suddenly I started hearing the hoarse voice from one of my sociable classmates singing a birthday song and other harmonious voices joined with his voice forming a melodious chorus. I only felt my blood rushed to my head and my cheeks were beginning to turn bright red. I really did not expect that.

After that I felt the loving hugs of some of my genial classmates. I saw that Selene, a lovely friend, had in her hands a delicious cake with many pink candles lighted and with a gentle voice asked me to go out. It was a small cake covered with delectable chocolate; I started having chocolate craving by just looking it. I blow out the small colorful candles and after removed them I started taking with my finger a little of that appetizing cake. When I tasted the yummy cake I felt like to try the chocolate melted in my mouth and began to enjoy the sweet taste.

Everybody started to make a row to receive a slice of cake, as I slowly withdrew from the tumult to avoid clogging. Suddenly one of my dear friends takes me by the hand and she gave me a very pretty red bag, was a gift! I opened the bag and I saw a small golden tube, I righted out of the bag and I saw that it was a pretty lipstick. I thanked her by saying I liked it. Also, Selene came over and gave me a slightly larger bag that contained a very pretty blue blouse which I touched and it felt very smooth. I thanked her giving her an amorous hug.

It was really surprising to see that my precious friends had prepared all this for me. I felt very honored and above all very happy to see everything they did to celebrate my birthday. This was my first surprise party and I loved being able to enjoy it with my valued colleagues.